Revealed

“Chains do not hold a marriage together. It is threads, hundreds of tiny threads which sew people together through the years”   – Simone Signoret

Revealed

Marriage is built on love, trust, friendship, compromise and faith… but what happens to the relationship when a couple forgets these key fundamentals?

 It’s a story of how life’s vicissitudes can lead to the drifting apart of even soulmates madly in love with each other. And how, when confronted with the stark reality of divorce, it is that very love that makes them find each other again. Will they work on fixing their broken marriage? Or will they choose to go their separate ways?

 

*Sorry Revealed is closed indefinitely*

19 thoughts on “Revealed

  1. Hello ji… i have read your story revealed at india forums.. but somehow i can’t post by comments there using mobile.. & your journey through that story from start to end was such that i had to comment
    Wat to say about your arnav & khushi.. from 1st chapter tone was set.. there is no love lacking but just with time dust has settled on intensity, emotions.. its rt with time goals change, priorities become different & इस जीवन की आपा धापी में हम सब याद रखते है बस रिश्ता कही गुम हो जाता है।
    & u potrayed this superbly through your characters.. i like u didn’t sugarcoat the difficulties of life.. i like for change its d man who didn’t gave up & nor did let his partner give up..
    Its not easy to write about divorce but u did manage to give us both outcomes with +ve result.. be it arnav & khushi managing to not only save their relationship but also manage to double their passion.. or payal who did get divorced but for her life doesn’t end there but she emerged strong from this.. this is wat life is all about..
    Adoption is another sensitive topic but here also u write it so beautifully that every word managed to move me.. i simply become a fan of Ms. ASR.. esp in your last chapter the type of maturity she showed when ppl were teasing for being adopted & less loved, was phenomenal.. in life u will get both +ve & -ve but its upto u wat u absorb.. & its heartening to see your aneri understanding this that such an early stage.. she is truly an old soul
    I just only want to say a standing ovation to u from my side.. i m eagerly waiting for d final phase.. equally sad to say goodbye
    Will wait 4 many more revealing stories from your pen
    Also since i was following your story from last few weeks i came to know about plagiarism of your story.. i don’t know whole incident nor any details but hats off to u that u stay strong … god bless u..

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words and taking the time out to comment. I am so glad you enjoyed this journey… it hasn’t been an easy with all the difficulties of life. Hearing from readers like you accepting the topics I have put forth, means so much to me.

      Hope you enjoy the final epilogue!

      Loads of love,
      Jigs

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      1. Yep finally read it on IF.. must say you have selected some hot hunks & beautiful ladies as your characters.. i just loved u go with sobti as Anhar.. that was good.. as far as Aneri goes u have done fabulous job with this character.. one of my favorites..i love her love story as well as trial & tribulations..
        My personal fav scenes is there feeling regarding divorce, khushi’ confrontation with her parents, arnav’s whole dilemma regarding his father, 1st time they met aneri, when they brought her to US after adoption & every romantic moment between arnav & khushi..
        Thanks for giving such a beautiful story to read.. i know your our taking break but i will wait for your nxt wrk.. all d best for watever u decide to do nxt..
        saxena_hgt from IF

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        1. I am so glad you were able to catch up with Revealed on IF. Thank you for taking the time reading it to the end and for your wonderful words recalling your favorite moments. Many of those are my favorites as well 😉

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  2. I know this is too late [:$] but finally able to comment on this wonderful story that actually made me cry and smile and feel the Dhak dhaks too 🤗I will miss this wonderful piece of universe of their own with all the tears the joys challenges that you weaved so beautifully with your words. I will not attempt to analyse your beautiful creation cause I feel so inadequate to do it but thank you for making me a part of this journey reminded me that there’s always hope even in the most adverse situations to laugh and take life as it comes just like Aneri did to fight for the loved ones like Arnav and Kushi did for their marriage to forgive and move on which makes you the greater person like Arnav chose to forgive His dad which in turn freed him from his past😚😍😍 Thanku for this Happily ever after. May God give us All the happily ever after that each of us deserve😘😘 Can’t wait to see you with to see your next masterpiece. Take care

    Benna
    I posted in IF too☺️

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    1. Awww thank you so much for wonderful comment for this journey, and to have you part of it has been amazing as well. It’s readers like you that make a writer motivated to continue writing, and update. It’s have been great to have you part of this journey and I hope you enjoy the next one!

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  3. I discovered your blog by chance and I fell in love with Revealed and everything that stemmed from it — all the characters, your writing style — I’m sad I never had a chance to read Stripped but I cannot wait for Temptation!

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  4. Hey i read stripped… Its an amazing story… The way arnav n khushi’s character has been potrayed is so amazing i felt in love with them again… I would like to read ur other story revealed… But i dont have access to the blog… Can i get d link of d blog… Big big thnk u in advance….

    Richa

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  5. Hello, just now found your blog. your writings are great!!!!! I hope all your personal issues get sorted out and you open your work! thanks.

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  6. Hi!

    I recently found out Temptation and just started it ,but now I couldn’t read and landed here.I did subscribed too.I am a bit confused because I can’t see anything.Am I doing something wrong?

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  7. hi as a late comer to Arhi ff , i came across your works just last year, am right now reading Temptation am on chapter 6 , enjoying it leisurely…. also seen mentions of your stories stripped and revealed from a lot of readers i understand you have rightly removed/ closed them due to plagiarism – is this a permant thing or are you going to wait till you find the right platform .pls do know whenever you open them
    sanghamitra123@yahoo.com

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  8. Well I really wanted read your story revealed as I was reading on IF but couldn’t complete it.
    So whenever u r started writing and if incase u wanted to keep ur blog protected please please put me on your list of invitees too as I am using a mobile and reading in this and I actually don’t know how to sent a request from it as I am learning.
    So please if u r keeping it protected please do add me on ur invitees list too.

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  9. Hey i have not read revealed. Can u please please please relaunch it. I love ur other works. Please!!

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